hope so deeply renewed,
the sadness of my heart fading in different hues
my mind swirl in with news of love so true
no more shall I feel so blue,
because I have thee
thee is now “we”
our love is all that you and i can see
or so I’m told by the ladies drinking hot tea,
I feel as fresh as the waves of the sea
my heart pounding with it pleas
of this I shall promise nothing more accept joyful glee
and laughters filled with nothing more but hehehes
I read a fair amount of poetry on WordPress each week. But I REALLY liked this one! Great job.
‘Accept’ should be ‘except’. Just a helpful hint. 🙂
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Thank you.
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